Chapter 1

The chapter begins with introducing characters such as my utterson and mr enfield then my enfield tells my utterson the story and who my utterson is and a girl which got stamped on .

It was a cold, bitter winter night in the woods with my friend Jack. We had just got lost on our way to a party and our car broke down so we had been walking for hours. We stopped to rest and I could see the tall trees swaying in the wind. I could hear the owls hooting, the wind howling ,branches scratching, I felt scared, nervous and on edge. I could smell damp, mud, sap and animal poo. After I saw poo I heard music and ran toward the sound it was coming from a big house on a hill. I quickly ran to the door as fast as I could, I was knocking and shouting until a creepy old man came down and opened the door. He said “Hello, please come in.” We went inside, I could smell chicken soup and half an hour later we all ate and the man said the phone wasn’t working because of the snow storm so we spent the night.

I woke up the next morning and Jack was gone. I jumped out of bed and went to look for him. As I walked down the stairs I heard power tools so I followed the sound to the basement. When I went down there I saw Jack and the old man knocked out on the floor with two monster-like animals standing over them. So I ran as fast as I could up the stairs. I ran outside and suddenly I saw a lot of them. I was surrounded, I was scared. At that moment I didn’t know what was going to happen. Next, one of them ran over to me and hit me over the head.

I woke up strapped to the table naked with a blindfold on. I could hear someone getting stabbed a lot of times, I could hear him screaming, it was making me feel sick. The sound was worse than the noise an animal makes when it is caught in a trap.

The monster-like animals left the room. My foot strap was loose and I found a way to brake it off. I took off all the straps and as I got up I saw a tunnel so I went inside and I ran. It led me outside to the front of the house and I ran for my life. In the distance I saw a police shack, I ran to it. When I looked inside there was no-one there. It was old and hadn’t been used for a long time so I broke the window and jumped inside. Everything was covered in dust with cobwebs in all the corners. Mice ran

Displeasing – to incur the dissatisfaction, dislike,

detestable

extraordinary

deformity –   A forms part of the body ?

Stevenson presents mr hyde as a man with a deformity for example mr enfield says “there is something wrong with his appearance;somethi

First the man runs the girl over then the men  threaten to ruin his reputation after he goes to someone house to get the money to pay them off finally they wait for 5 hours till the bank opens in  hen feels chambers

Against the age being lowered.

I think the voting age shouldn’t be lowered because when your 16 your still at a learning point in your life and you haven’t reached your full maturity to been making those big voting decision.
For e.g
– they are still going to school.
– they are still living with their parents.
– they are still learning how to drive.

Reece soliloquy (1st) from Joel North on Vimeo.

`Hi,

My argument is about negative stereotypes that adults associate with teenagers. Which is that all teenagers are either gang members or slobs.

Which I think is  not true because lots of teens are very Active in there daily lives.If you see a teen in a black hoodie what do you think ?

Maybe the weather was bad on that day so ain’t they allowed to cover up to keep warm.
Why would they hide their face?

Teenagers are still going throw puberty so they covering up the Spots on faces.
Most of society has labelled teenagers as monsters, why bother behaving differently?

If society has labelled teenagers as monsters and slobs then why do you expect them to behave differently and to follow your expectations if this is what they are labelled as in the community?
If it wasn’t for all the bad  and stereotypical things the news papers say about teenagers they might not cover up their faces.
I know teenagers have there good day and they bad day but Teenagers old enough to be cooking the dinner for you,just give they more responsibility in the house.

You should be able to be proud of your teenagers  there the next generation destined for great things because I don’t see you complaining when tears are making you look good.
So these vicious newspaper article about teens should stop after rule we are human beings.

I think adults are just big hypocrites because they weren’t  perfect so why do they have the right to be saying all these unspeakable things about teenagers,im sure back in  your day you adults were doing worse things and adults are so busy trying to shape us to better Virson of them they forget we are different maybe if u just listen more instead of thinking you know us better than we know our self, get with the modern times the war has ended.

Even if your just trying to protect us im sure there must be a better way to do it with out hurting teenagers feelings.
All these harsh things you say about us we do have feelings after all we are only human beings.
Well we are trying so hard these days to get the grades we want because everythink is getting  difficult.
We don’t even have time to go out with all the gcse work , we get about 600 hundred word essay every day so tell me how we have time to be trouble making?

Well i think if you give them some more attention and dont think the  worst when you see them because teens can be every nice when you show them respect in the same way  you want them to respect you.

Challenge stereotypes – why are they wrong?

Stereotypes are wrong because you’re judging people on what one person has done it’s not fair which

Is a big problem because they can turn a community against one thing which could be a lie .

What are your aspirations?

I want to to get good grades in school because i want to be able to have a good life and i want my friends and family to be proud of me.

I want to go to university so i can  have a better chance of success in my future becuase life is getting harder only the best of the best can succeed .

I How will you achieve these?

I will achieve this by putting my head down and force of my education and WORK HARD.

What barriers are in your way?

Nothing.

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